I am a Year 3 learner in Room 14 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Miss Davis.
Hi Mariko, I really like you picture. I think it really shows how sad and lonely the robot was. You have made a good start to writing this year Mariko. I look forward to reading more of your writing. From Miss Davis.
Morena Mariko,Thank you for sharing your story and picture on your blog. I watched the video of Jack on your class blog. You are so right, Jack was really sad and couldn't find a friend. I like how the tried to make his own friend. It was a nice happy ending when he did find a friend and they could hold hands. I wonder if you'll get to make a robot in your MakerSpace one day. That would be heaps of fun. Keep up the great writing and drawing.Ngā mihiTania